From 83cf77c97a594035b89a47b01f76d12b3a23dea3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 23 Jul 2022 19:20:07 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 01/10] Shiki profile

---
 EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt b/EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt
index 9e0ccfe..851cce0 100644
--- a/EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt	
+++ b/EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt	
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 遠野志貴
 Tohno Shiki
 ”モノの死”を視る異能「直視の魔眼」を持つ高校生
-The High Schooler with the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception which can discern the end of all things 
+The High Schooler with the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception which can discern the end of all things
 
 歴史のある名門・遠野家の長男で、親類の有間家に預けられていたが、父の死去に伴い遠野家に呼び戻され、総耶の街に帰ってきた。
-Shiki is the eldest son of the esteemed and prestigious Tohno family. Though he was placed in the custody of the Arima family for a while, he has now been called back to the Tohno family in consequence of his father's death, and so returned to Souya.
+Shiki is the eldest son of the esteemed and prestigious Tohno family. Though he was placed in the custody of the Arima family for a while, he was called back to the Tohno family following the passing of his father, and so returned to Souya.
 
 幼い頃の事故により、「万物の死期・終わりという概念」を、線や点の形で視覚情報として捉える「直視の魔眼」を持ってしまった。特殊な眼鏡で魔眼の発動を抑え込むことにより、日常生活を送れている。
-Due to an accident in his youth, he has come in possession of the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception, which allow him to visualize the 'conceptual fated end of everything' in the form of lines and points. Thanks to his special pair of glasses, he can suppress the activation of his Mystic Eyes and lead a normal life.
+Due to an accident in his youth, he has come in possession of the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception—eyes which allow him to see the "conceptual fated end of everything" in the form of lines and points. Thanks to his special pair of glasses, he can suppress the activation of his Mystic Eyes and lead a normal life.
 
 平凡な学生ではあるが、死を視覚化できてしまう影響で、その死生観は成熟し、また変質している。事故の後遺症と魔眼の負荷により、慢性的な貧血に悩まされている。バトル中は眼鏡を外し、直視の魔眼の能力が解放される。
 Though he is mostly an ordinary student, being able to visualize death has altered and matured his views on mortality. Shiki is tormented by chronic anemia, partially as an after-effect of his accident, but also because of the burden imposed by his Mystic Eyes. In battle, he takes off his glasses to activate the powers of his Mystic Eyes of Death Perception.

From 1add99b6fe77865680e39863b7509b254bab98e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 23 Jul 2022 19:37:55 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 02/10] Shiki winmes

---
 EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt | 90 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 49 insertions(+), 41 deletions(-)

diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
index b834b2c..3d53a62 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ while you still can.
 
 WinMes01:
 chara_type 103
-Wow, thought I was a goner there for a second. 
-I guess that's what I get for going easy on you.
+Wow, thought I was a goner there.
+Guess that's what I get for going easy on you.
 \e
 
 WinMes02:
@@ -23,118 +23,126 @@ See, all things that are alive eventually die.
 
 WinMes03:
 chara_type 101
-I'll be taking my leave now.
+I'm getting out of here.
 I can only fight for so long before I get anemic.
 \e
 
 WinMes04:
 chara_type 3
-You had fun? Good for you. 
-Personally, I'm totally beat. 
+You had fun? Good for you.
+Personally, I'm totally beat.
 Try to be a bit more considerate next time.
 \e
 
 WinMes05:
 chara_type 1
-Sorry, but I've got places to be. 
+Sorry, but I've got places to be.
 I'll call an ambulance for you.
 You can reflect on what you did in your hospital bed.
 \e
 
+// TODO: Ask about "It seems bad luck has cursed the both of us."
+// Suggestions: "Looks like we're both cursed with bad luck."
+//              "Looks like we're both in for a rough time."
+// Something that sounds natural and conveys that he's fucked, basically.
 WinMes06:
 chara_type 101
-Black cats, crows, hearses... 
-Something about walking under weeping willows too.
+Black cats, crows, hearses...
+Something about walking under weeping willows, too.
 It seems bad luck has cursed the both of us.
 \e
 
 WinMes07:
 chara_type 1
-Try harder next time. 
+Try harder next time.
 You know how it is these days...
-Appearances can be deceiving.
+Looks can be deceiving.
 Never know what'll turn out to be dangerous.
 \e
 
-// �΃A���N�F�C�h Versus Arcueid
+// �΃A���N�F�C�h Versus Arcueid
 WinMes08:
 chara_type 103
-Whoa! That was dangerous! 
-You just don't know how to hold back, do you, Arcueid?
-So don't go picking fights just because you feel like it.
+Whoa! That was dangerous!
+Would it hurt you to hold back for once, Arcueid?
+You shouldn't go picking fights just because you feel like it.
 \e
 
-// �΃V�G�� Versus Ciel
+// �΃V�G�� Versus Ciel
 WinMes09:
 chara_type 100
-Thanks, Ciel. 
-I really love the way you 
-always kind of hold back against me.
+Thanks, Ciel.
+I really love the way you always go kinda easy on me.
 \e
 
-// �ΏH�t Versus Akiha
+// �ΏH�t Versus Akiha
 WinMes10:
 chara_type 103
-That was real close... 
+That was real close...
 Has Akiha been training in secret or something?
 \e
 
-// �΃q�X�R�n Versus Maids
+// �΃q�X�R�n Versus Maids
 WinMes11:
 chara_type 101
-Sorry, you two! I promise to head back to the mansion 
-when I'm finished! I'll make this up to you then!
+Sorry, you two! I promise to head back to the mansion
+when I'm done here! I'll make it up to you then!
 \e
 
-// ���� Versus Kohaku
+// ���� Versus Hisui
 WinMes12:
 chara_type 101
 I didn't realize there was a fake Hisui out there.
-Still, it doesn't feel right raising a hand against her. 
+Still, it doesn't feel right raising a hand against her.
 Sorry about that.
 \e
 
-// ������ Versus Kohaku
+// ������ Versus Kohaku
 WinMes13:
 chara_type 103
-You're just a fake Kohaku, aren't you? 
-I'll have to remember to apologize to the real 
+You're just a fake Kohaku, aren't you?
+I'll have to remember to apologize to the real
 one when I see her. Do you mind if we call it a day?
 \e
 
-// ���a�� Versus Kishima
+// ���a�� Versus Kishima
 WinMes14:
 chara_type 1
 Who... was that...?
 I can't remember...
-It almost felt as if I was dreaming of the past...
+Almost as if a dream of the past came back to haunt me.
 \e
 
-// �ΐŽq Versus Aoko
+// �ΐŽq Versus Aoko
+// TODO: the "Sensei" is an annoying problem here.
+// I think it'd be good if we sat down and came up with some translations for it before merging.
+// I don't think a direct TL will do the trick, so "Teach" or something along those lines is off the table.
+// Although maybe "Mentor" would work, or something in that direction at least? idk will have to discuss it.
 WinMes15:
 chara_type 100
 And that's all I've learned.
-Don't worry, Aoko. I don't always 
-succeed, but I'll always try my best.
+Don't worry, Aoko. I don't always succeed,
+but I'll never back out without at least trying.
 \e
 
-// �����V�G�� Versus Powered Ciel
+// �����V�G�� Versus Powered Ciel
 WinMes16:
 chara_type 100
 I've learned a lot from this mock-battle.
-Matching my movements with yours was enjoyable, 
-almost like a waltz, even though we were fight against 
-each other, rather than together.
+I did my best to match my movements with yours,
+almost like a waltz. We may have been fighting
+against each other rather than together,
+but it was fun all the same.
 \e
 
-// 99�܂Œlj��”\
+// 99�܂Œlj��”\
 
-// �R�A���E�P�O�A����p�Z���t
+// �R�A���E�P�O�A����p�Z���t
 
 WinMes3WinStreak00:
 chara_type 103
-Three wins already?! I had planned on going home early,
-but would you mind me sticking around for a bit longer?
+Three wins already?! I was planning on going home early,
+but you wouldn't mind if I stuck around a bit longer, right?
 \e
 
 WinMes10WinStreak00:

From 79e32f3aa55389cc007f32da3bddee6741c762b6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 23 Jul 2022 19:39:11 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 03/10] minor shiki winmes edit

---
 EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
index 3d53a62..824763d 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ but it was fun all the same.
 WinMes3WinStreak00:
 chara_type 103
 Three wins already?! I was planning on going home early,
-but you wouldn't mind if I stuck around a bit longer, right?
+but you don't mind if I stick around a bit longer, right?
 \e
 
 WinMes10WinStreak00:

From 9a52f6e5526942a1ce5cb21a21b0bc6212c93c0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 23 Jul 2022 20:06:31 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 04/10] More shiki editing

---
 EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt | 14 +++---
 EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv   | 46 +++++++++----------
 2 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)

diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
index 824763d..46244e5 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
@@ -63,23 +63,23 @@ Never know what'll turn out to be dangerous.
 // �΃A���N�F�C�h Versus Arcueid
 WinMes08:
 chara_type 103
-Whoa! That was dangerous!
-Would it hurt you to hold back for once, Arcueid?
-You shouldn't go picking fights just because you feel like it.
+Whoa! I could've died there!
+Would it hurt to hold back for once, Arcueid?!
+Stop picking fights just because you feel like it.
 \e
 
 // �΃V�G�� Versus Ciel
 WinMes09:
 chara_type 100
 Thanks, Ciel.
-I really love the way you always go kinda easy on me.
+I really love how you always go kinda easy on me.
 \e
 
 // �ΏH�t Versus Akiha
 WinMes10:
 chara_type 103
 That was real close...
-Has Akiha been training in secret or something?
+Has she been training in secret or something?
 \e
 
 // �΃q�X�R�n Versus Maids
@@ -101,8 +101,8 @@ Sorry about that.
 WinMes13:
 chara_type 103
 You're just a fake Kohaku, aren't you?
-I'll have to remember to apologize to the real
-one when I see her. Do you mind if we call it a day?
+I'll have to remember to apologize to the real one
+when I see her. Do you mind if we call it a day?
 \e
 
 // ���a�� Versus Kishima
diff --git a/EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv b/EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv
index 7f92b08..c93bdd6 100644
--- a/EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv
+++ b/EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ battlevoice_chr000_641,Begone.,
 battlevoice_chr000_132,Had enough?,
 battlevoice_chr000_133,Boooring. You get an F.,
 battlevoice_chr000_134,This is the end.,
-battlevoice_chr000_135,"Whoops, seems the match's over! ��",
+battlevoice_chr000_135,"Whoops, seems the match's over! ��",
 battlevoice_chr000_136,"Oops, maybe I went a bit overboard.",
 battlevoice_chr000_622,"Feel sorry yet, Shiki?",
 battlevoice_chr000_623,"Phew, It wasn't easy catching you.",
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ battlevoice_chr002_150,I cannot accept this!,
 battlevoice_chr002_151,Why you impudent little...!,
 battlevoice_chr002_108,Shouldn't you be working?,
 battlevoice_chr003_100,You're serious about this.,
-battlevoice_chr003_101,"I'd rather not, but it would seem I have no choice.",
+battlevoice_chr003_101,"I'd rather not, but if you wanna do this so badly...",
 battlevoice_chr003_102,Let's keep this short. I don't have much stamina.,
 battlevoice_chr003_103,My head aches so...,
 battlevoice_chr003_104,You're making your brother worried.,
@@ -142,8 +142,8 @@ battlevoice_chr003_105,I'm against domestic violence!,
 battlevoice_chr003_106,"A light spar, is it?",
 battlevoice_chr003_107,Aren't you saying you just wanna play around?!,
 battlevoice_chr003_108,"Isn't that an abuse of power, Ciel?",
-battlevoice_chr003_109,You're telling me the whole nun thing wasn't just a hobby!?,
-battlevoice_chr003_113,"Can we take this elsewher- Not gonna listen, huh?",
+battlevoice_chr003_109,You're telling me the whole nun thing wasn't just a hobby?!,
+battlevoice_chr003_113,"Can we take this elsewher—Not gonna listen, huh?",
 battlevoice_chr003_114,Looks like we're both outta luck.,
 battlevoice_chr003_650,Um... why did it come to this?,
 battlevoice_chr003_110,This is only the beginning.,
@@ -157,13 +157,13 @@ battlevoice_chr003_124,What a nightmare...,
 battlevoice_chr003_120,Damn... So tired...,
 battlevoice_chr003_653,I can't just use the back side of a double-edged knife.,
 battlevoice_chr003_654,"This isn't over yet, is it?!",
-battlevoice_chr003_655,"You're still just raring to go, aren't you?",
-battlevoice_chr003_130,"Phew, thought I was a goner there for a minute.",
+battlevoice_chr003_655,"Still raring to go, are you?",
+battlevoice_chr003_130,"Phew, almost thought I was a goner there.",
 battlevoice_chr003_131,All's well that ends well.,
 battlevoice_chr003_657,"Alright, let's leave it at that then.",
-battlevoice_chr003_132,I'm legging it! As if I'd stay around for this!,
+battlevoice_chr003_132,I'm legging it! Like I'd stay around for this!,
 battlevoice_chr003_658,"Sorry, I've gotta return some videotapes!",
-battlevoice_chr003_133,"If you've had enough, then give up already.",
+battlevoice_chr003_133,"If you've had enough, give up already.",
 battlevoice_chr003_134,"This is the end. Begone, vampire.",
 battlevoice_chr003_135,"No matter how many times I live, it won't be enough for this.",
 battlevoice_chr003_136,"Don't force yourself, just stay down.",
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ battlevoice_chr004_110,This is an outrage!,
 battlevoice_chr004_111,Looks like I've been backed into a corner.,
 battlevoice_chr004_112,Must think positive!,
 battlevoice_chr004_120,"'kay, cleaning complete!",
-battlevoice_chr004_121,Don't you change that channel! ��,
+battlevoice_chr004_121,Don't you change that channel! ��,
 battlevoice_chr004_122,Was that to your satisfaction?,
 battlevoice_chr004_123,I know how to handle a broom.,
 battlevoice_chr004_790,"I am your physician after all, Shiki.",
@@ -194,10 +194,10 @@ battlevoice_chr004_791,"Let's not tell Lady Akiha about this, alright?",
 battlevoice_chr004_784,What's that? Even the mighty Akiha can stumble?,
 battlevoice_chr004_785,It would seem both of us have revealed our true intentions.,
 battlevoice_chr004_789,Have you fallen for me all over again?,
-battlevoice_chr004_131,What an unexpected outcome! ��,
+battlevoice_chr004_131,What an unexpected outcome! ��,
 battlevoice_chr004_132,"Phew, that was close.",
 battlevoice_chr004_776,"Phew, that was close.",
-battlevoice_chr004_133,I did it! An overwhelming victory! ��,
+battlevoice_chr004_133,I did it! An overwhelming victory! ��,
 battlevoice_chr004_134,Please be sure to make an appointment next time.,
 battlevoice_chr004_135,"No more pranks, 'kay?",
 battlevoice_chr004_792,I appears my surveillance is still lacking...,
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ battlevoice_chr008_104,"Oh no, the teaching job is my hobby \sf000",
 battlevoice_chr008_105,I appreciate the lesson! \sf000,
 battlevoice_chr008_106,Eeek! As if the True Ancestor wasn't scary enough before!,
 battlevoice_chr008_107,Okay! Time to fight!,
-battlevoice_chr008_108,"And just what were you staring at, you cheeky little thing ��",
+battlevoice_chr008_108,"And just what were you staring at, you cheeky little thing ��",
 battlevoice_chr008_110,I'll add your grudge to the list.,
 battlevoice_chr008_111,I'm going to snap that little neck of yours.\sf000,
 battlevoice_chr008_112,"Oh, come on!",
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ battlevoice_chr008_132,That was real close! What a thankless job I have!,
 battlevoice_chr008_133,"I'm sorry, it's just that I'm super strong against weaklings.",
 battlevoice_chr008_135,Just kidding! Did I give you a scare?,
 battlevoice_chr008_134,Did you enjoy my special lesson?,
-battlevoice_chr008_136,Easy-peasy! Awesome! ��,
+battlevoice_chr008_136,Easy-peasy! Awesome! ��,
 battlevoice_chr008_670,"Oh, I get it! This Ciel is a fake!",
 battlevoice_chr008_671,What's happening? This went so well it's getting scary.,
 battlevoice_chr008_673,"Wow, no way! I won?! Yaaay!",
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ battlevoice_chr013_105,Taste my bajiquan!,
 battlevoice_chr013_740,G-Give me back my brother!,
 battlevoice_chr013_700,B-B-Brother... H-Here I come!,
 battlevoice_chr013_120,Yes!,
-battlevoice_chr013_121,Yeah! ��,
+battlevoice_chr013_121,Yeah! ��,
 battlevoice_chr013_122,How's that?!,
 battlevoice_chr013_123,Hyah! Take that!,
 battlevoice_chr013_128,Thank you very much!,
@@ -495,13 +495,13 @@ battlevoice_chr000_680,But of course. I'm keeping myself at your level.,
 battlevoice_chr000_681,"What? You can't do that, can you?!",
 battlevoice_chr000_682,I could ask the newest Magician the same thing.,
 battlevoice_chr003_670,Of course not. I've got nothing to be afraid of.,
-battlevoice_chr003_671,"I see... Past saving, huh?,"
+battlevoice_chr003_671,"I see. Past saving, huh?,"
 battlevoice_chr003_672,Sheesh. That's just like you.,
-battlevoice_chr003_673,Right... this is the kinda person she was...,
-battlevoice_chr003_674,Seriously? you're gonna see how I've been by fighting me?!,
+battlevoice_chr003_673,Right. This is who she is.,
+battlevoice_chr003_674,Seriously? You're gonna see how I've been by FIGHTING me?!,
 battlevoice_chr003_680,Yeah... a strong one... from below... right to the jaw...,
-battlevoice_chr003_681,"You're a real drill sergeant, you know...?",
-battlevoice_chr003_682,It's fine... That won't be necessary.,
+battlevoice_chr003_681,"You're a real drill sergeant, you know?",
+battlevoice_chr003_682,It's fine. That won't be necessary.,
 battlevoice_chr005_650,"Don't be like that, my fellow vampire. I promise this'll be electrifying.",
 battlevoice_chr005_651,"What's wrong? I think you're lacking a bit of bloodlust, young lady!",
 battlevoice_chr005_652,"That was a long time ago. As you can see, I'm more of an outlaw now!",
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ battlevoice_chr011_791,(Heehee... We match... since we both wear glasses!),
 battlevoice_chr011_792,"Ha-ha-ha. No idea who you might be, but I'll be taking you down, okay?",
 battlevoice_chr014_100,"The hooorrifying rabbit hunt starts now, 'kay?",
 battlevoice_chr014_101,"You want to be played with, dontcha? C'mon, don't hold back, say it.",
-battlevoice_chr014_102,"Okay, Reality complete �� Don't worry, I'll reset you! \sf000",
+battlevoice_chr014_102,"Okay, Reality complete �� Don't worry, I'll reset you! \sf000",
 battlevoice_chr014_103,I wonder what kind of screams this toy'll let out?,
 battlevoice_chr014_104,Really? You actually think this is even gonna be a fight?,
 battlevoice_chr014_105,"Hey, are you feeling the jitters? Can't get enough?",
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ battlevoice_chr014_128,I'm at the top of my game!,
 battlevoice_chr014_130,"Oh you poor thing, did you finish prematurely?",
 battlevoice_chr014_131,"We'll continue this in a dream, 'kay?",
 battlevoice_chr014_132,"Wait, wait, giving up already? That's pathetic!",
-battlevoice_chr014_133,"Another elegant victory!�� I am a vampire, after all.��",
+battlevoice_chr014_133,"Another elegant victory!�� I am a vampire, after all.��",
 battlevoice_chr014_134,You little... You sure gave me a hard time given how weak you were.,
 battlevoice_chr014_135,"Oh no, what a weakling! Guess I'll take it home to play some more, then!",
 battlevoice_chr014_116,Haha... Ahahaha! Yay! Now I'm the stronger of us!,
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ battlevoice_chr010_686,It was. It hurt so much you'd almost think my head had co
 battlevoice_chr010_687,"You're the leader. You should spill your own blood for once, Bestino",
 battlevoice_chr011_793,"Undercover again, Acting Presbyter?",
 battlevoice_chr011_794,"Worry not, I'm only fighting you as an Executor right now.",
-battlevoice_chr014_119,"You're not getting away that easily, you little shit ��",
+battlevoice_chr014_119,"You're not getting away that easily, you little shit ��",
 battlevoice_chr014_109,Hah! You're a spiteful little shit to the last!,
 battlevoice_chr015_122,You look a bit young for someone using such an ancient weapon.,
 battlevoice_chr015_123,"Hmm, I think you're a pretty big deal yourself though?",
@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ battlevoice_chr017_109,"I'm aboutta give you a personal reeducation, fatass.",
 battlevoice_chr017_110,Don't give me shit for my retro hobbies.,
 battlevoice_chr017_111,What's a goddamn Magician goin' around playing superhero for?,
 battlevoice_chr017_112,"Not a lick of social savvy in ya, that's how it always is with geniuses...",
-battlevoice_chr017_113,I don't recall orderin' you to subdue the whole damn city!?,
+battlevoice_chr017_113,I don't recall orderin' you to subdue the whole damn city?!,
 battlevoice_chr017_114,"Yeah. My goons are all provin' a bit useless, so I ain't got much choice.",
 battlevoice_chr017_115,"Hah, lose to me, and you ain't fit to be in the Burial Agency.",
 battlevoice_chr017_116,You did. 'S why I let you come to me instead.,

From 63bcce889521e73b0a5296afc90dde62c8821c24 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 23 Jul 2022 20:20:16 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 05/10] Minor profile edit

---
 EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt b/EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt
index 851cce0..c9aaa9f 100644
--- a/EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt	
+++ b/EN/Images/transcripts and raw translations/shiki.txt	
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Tohno Shiki
 The High Schooler with the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception which can discern the end of all things
 
 歴史のある名門・遠野家の長男で、親類の有間家に預けられていたが、父の死去に伴い遠野家に呼び戻され、総耶の街に帰ってきた。
-Shiki is the eldest son of the esteemed and prestigious Tohno family. Though he was placed in the custody of the Arima family for a while, he was called back to the Tohno family following the passing of his father, and so returned to Souya.
+Shiki is the eldest son of the esteemed and prestigious Tohno family. Though he was placed in the custody of the Arima family for a while, he was called back to the Tohno family following the passing of his father, and thus returned to Souya.
 
 幼い頃の事故により、「万物の死期・終わりという概念」を、線や点の形で視覚情報として捉える「直視の魔眼」を持ってしまった。特殊な眼鏡で魔眼の発動を抑え込むことにより、日常生活を送れている。
 Due to an accident in his youth, he has come in possession of the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception—eyes which allow him to see the "conceptual fated end of everything" in the form of lines and points. Thanks to his special pair of glasses, he can suppress the activation of his Mystic Eyes and lead a normal life.

From 1fd647f6fd166c4a6683538e252aea1ebf4fe012 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 3 Aug 2022 23:05:31 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 06/10] Shiki update winmes

---
 EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt | 54 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)

diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
index 46244e5..f54db46 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
@@ -3,12 +3,15 @@ WinMesScript
 
 WinMes00:
 chara_type 101
-You wanna go again? I'm game,
-but you should probably quit
+You wanna go again?
+I'm game, but you should probably quit
 while you still can.
 \e
 
 
+// TODO: Is this a more jokey "damn thought I was gone for" kinda line,
+//       or would something like "Damn, I saw my life flash before my eyes there"
+//       work too?
 WinMes01:
 chara_type 103
 Wow, thought I was a goner there.
@@ -31,14 +34,14 @@ WinMes04:
 chara_type 3
 You had fun? Good for you.
 Personally, I'm totally beat.
-Try to be a bit more considerate next time.
+Try thinking about others a little, please.
 \e
 
 WinMes05:
 chara_type 1
 Sorry, but I've got places to be.
 I'll call an ambulance for you.
-You can reflect on what you did in your hospital bed.
+You can reflect on what you've done in a hospital bed.
 \e
 
 // TODO: Ask about "It seems bad luck has cursed the both of us."
@@ -55,9 +58,8 @@ It seems bad luck has cursed the both of us.
 WinMes07:
 chara_type 1
 Try harder next time.
-You know how it is these days...
-Looks can be deceiving.
-Never know what'll turn out to be dangerous.
+Looks can be deceiving, especially nowadays.
+Never know who will end up being trouble.
 \e
 
 // �΃A���N�F�C�h Versus Arcueid
@@ -68,6 +70,7 @@ Would it hurt to hold back for once, Arcueid?!
 Stop picking fights just because you feel like it.
 \e
 
+// TODO: Further edit this line. I don't like it much.
 // �΃V�G�� Versus Ciel
 WinMes09:
 chara_type 100
@@ -93,46 +96,42 @@ when I'm done here! I'll make it up to you then!
 WinMes12:
 chara_type 101
 I didn't realize there was a fake Hisui out there.
-Still, it doesn't feel right raising a hand against her.
-Sorry about that.
+But fake or not, it doesn't feel right to raise
+a hand against her. Sorry about that.
 \e
 
 // ������ Versus Kohaku
 WinMes13:
 chara_type 103
 You're just a fake Kohaku, aren't you?
-I'll have to remember to apologize to the real one
-when I see her. Do you mind if we call it a day?
+I should definitely apologize to the real one.
+You okay if we call it a day for now?
 \e
 
 // ���a�� Versus Kishima
 WinMes14:
 chara_type 1
-Who... was that...?
+Who... was that?
 I can't remember...
-Almost as if a dream of the past came back to haunt me.
+It's almost as if a dream of the past
+came back to haunt me.
 \e
 
 // �ΐŽq Versus Aoko
-// TODO: the "Sensei" is an annoying problem here.
-// I think it'd be good if we sat down and came up with some translations for it before merging.
-// I don't think a direct TL will do the trick, so "Teach" or something along those lines is off the table.
-// Although maybe "Mentor" would work, or something in that direction at least? idk will have to discuss it.
 WinMes15:
 chara_type 100
 And that's all I've learned.
-Don't worry, Aoko. I don't always succeed,
-but I'll never back out without at least trying.
+Don't worry, Sensei. I don't always succeed,
+but I never go down without a fight.
 \e
 
 // �����V�G�� Versus Powered Ciel
 WinMes16:
 chara_type 100
-I've learned a lot from this mock-battle.
-I did my best to match my movements with yours,
-almost like a waltz. We may have been fighting
-against each other rather than together,
-but it was fun all the same.
+I learned a lot from this mock battle.
+I did my best to match my movements with yours, like a waltz.
+We may have been fighting against each other rather than
+with each other this time, but it was fun all the same.
 \e
 
 // 99�܂Œlj��”\
@@ -141,13 +140,14 @@ but it was fun all the same.
 
 WinMes3WinStreak00:
 chara_type 103
-Three wins already?! I was planning on going home early,
-but you don't mind if I stick around a bit longer, right?
+Three wins already?! I was originally planning on
+going home early, but you don't mind if I stick around
+a bit longer, right?
 \e
 
 WinMes10WinStreak00:
 chara_type 0
 Ten wins?! That's amazing!
-This is getting pretty fun!
+This is actually pretty fun!
 Let's keep it up!
 \e
\ No newline at end of file

From 08c3b3c299a56ce0b70637741fcedfd31d29b9b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 3 Aug 2022 23:59:25 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 07/10] Shiki: Story edits

---
 .../talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt     | 20 +++----
 .../talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt  | 54 +++++++++----------
 .../talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt  | 39 +++++++-------
 .../talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt     | 41 +++++++-------
 4 files changed, 78 insertions(+), 76 deletions(-)

diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt
index 47aa5f4..4d829f4 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt
@@ -16,15 +16,15 @@
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0000", 100>
 Shiki
-What an ominous moon... If I don't keep it
-together, I'll start seeing lines everywhere.
+What an ominous moon. If I don't keep it together,
+I'll start seeing lines everywhere.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0001", 100>
 Shiki
-On nights like these, it would be prudent
-to stay inside and wait for morning.
+On nights like these, it'd be wise to stay
+holed up at home until morning.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 4, 0, 1>
@@ -32,26 +32,26 @@ to stay inside and wait for morning.
 \aw
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0002", 100>
 Shiki
-But I can't afford to do that.
+But there's no way I can do that.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0003", 100>
 Shiki
-I am the only man in the house, after all.
+Not as the only man in the house, anyway.
 \l
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0004", 100>
 Shiki
-Also, I really wanna show the others that I can 
-be depended on as the elder brother that I am.
+It'd be really nice if I could show the others
+they can depend on me as the eldest son.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0005", 100>
 Shiki
-Right now, that means patrolling the area 
-around the mansion for any signs of trouble.
+And the best way to do that right now would be to patrol
+around the mansion and deal with any trouble I find.
 
 \\@BGM_STOP@<0>
 \e
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt
index 1534fb6..e1f0d8d 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 7, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0010", 100>
 Noel
-Hmm... 
+Hmm...
 I can kinda see in, but not really...
 I can kinda enter, but not really...
 \l
@@ -24,21 +24,21 @@ I can kinda enter, but not really...
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 3, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0011", 100>
 Noel
-What is up with this mansion...?
+What's wrong with this mansion?
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 4, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0012", 100>
 Noel
-They even have a whole home security system...
-Who do they think they are, combining this modern 
-stuff with the lay of the land?!
+They even installed a whole home security system...
+Who do they think they are, combining this modern junk
+with the lay of the land?!
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 3, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0013", 100>
 Noel
-Why can't they rely more on something magecrafty?! 
+Why can't they rely more on old fashioned magecraft?!
 Ugh, this sucks!
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 1, 0>
@@ -46,68 +46,69 @@ Ugh, this sucks!
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 7, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0010", 100>
 Shiki
-And there they are...
+This is exactly what I was talking about.
 \l
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0011", 100>
 Shiki
-Someone super suspicious...
-Flagrantly peeking into our mansion...
+A super suspicious person blatantly peeking into our mansion.
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 6, 0, 1>
 \\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 4>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0014", 100>
 Noel
-Wha-?! Oh, wait, that unassuming appearance, yet deep
-and chilling killer sight. It could only be one person...
+Wha?! Hang on... That bland, everyday teen appearance
+with killer eyes that sends chills up your spine!
+Yeah, only one person fits that bill...
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 0, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0015", 100>
 Noel
-Hello there, Shiki!
+Hey there, Shiki!
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 1, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0016", 100>
 Noel
-I understand that it's only natural to wonder about
-your attractive teacher's private life...
+I understand that every boy your age is really interested
+in their attractive teacher's private life, I really do...
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 8, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0017", 100>
 Noel
-But stalking me to see where I work at night? 
-That's some real delinquent behavior there, you know.
+But stalking me on my night job?
+That's really naughty behaviour, young man.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 300, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0018", 100>
 Noel
-Or are you here for some... 
-illicit... extra-curricular activities?
+Or were you perhaps looking for more...
+"illicit" extra-curricular activities?
+\l
 
 \\@CHARA_OUT@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 0>
 \aw
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 103, 11, 0>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0012", 100>
 Shiki
-......
-
+...
+\l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 11, 0, 1>
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, -1, 22, 20>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0019", 100>
 Noel
-Whoa! Hold on! I know this looks suspicious,
-but aren't you jumping the gun a bit here?!
+Time out, time out! I know I look really suspicious right now,
+but hear me out! Don't jump to conclusions!
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 9, 32, 20>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0020", 100>
 Noel
-Oh well, I suppose this'll save time in the long run.
+Oh well. I guess this saves us some time.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 0, 32, 1>
@@ -119,9 +120,8 @@ There's no point in hiding now that I've been found out.
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 1, 32, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0022", 100>
 Noel
-Guess I'll juuust have to crush your limbs a little
-so I can bring you in for interrogation. 
-
+Guess I'll juuust have to crush a couple bones
+so I can take you in for questioning!
 
 \\@BGM_STOP@<0>
-\e
\ No newline at end of file
+\e
diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt
index a548b48..b867f97 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt
@@ -14,68 +14,67 @@
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0020", 100>
 Shiki
 So you're the one behind this whole vampire mess?
-You've been acting pretty brazenly, haven't you?
+Not really trying to hide it, are you?
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 1, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0020", 100>
 Volv
-You think this smoldering city... is my work...?
-What an unfounded and odd provocation... murderer.
+You think this smoldering city is my work?
+What an unfounded and odd provocation, murderer.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 0, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0021", 100>
 Volv
-It makes me more sad than it does upset...
+It makes me more mournful than upset.
 After all, one cannot stay angry at a fool.
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0021", 100>
 Shiki
-Really now? Sorry to disappoint, but I 
-don't really care what you think of me.
+Really now? Hate to break it to you,
+but I really don't care what you think of me.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0022", 100>
 Shiki
-The mere sight of a vampire is almost 
-enough to make me lose myself in anger.
+The mere sight of a vampire's almost enough
+to make me lose it.
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 0, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0022", 100>
 Volv
-I see... It appears you have a wound that 
-you cannot forget, yet cannot recall either.
+I see. It appears you have a wound you cannot forget,
+yet cannot recall either.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 4, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0023", 100>
 Volv
-How pitiful... Such fury that it compels you to
-challenge even a Dead Apostle... despite that 
-you are but merely human.
+How pitiful. It brings you such fury it compels you
+to challenge even a Dead Apostle, despite the fact
+you are merely human.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 2, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0024", 100>
 Volv
-I could not turn down such a challenge... now could I?
+I could not turn down such a challenge, now could I?
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 3, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0025", 100>
 Volv
-Come at me, blood-bag...
+Come, blood bag.
 I shall gratefully accept your scorching blood.
 \l
 
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 102, 0, 1>//�{��2
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 102, 0, 1>//�{��2
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0023", 100>
 Shiki
-Say whatever you want. What I'm going to give you 
-is neither warm nor cold. It is simply death.
-
+Sorry to disappoint, but what I've got in store for you
+is neither warm nor cold. It's simply death.
 
 \\@BGM_STOP@<0>
-\e
\ No newline at end of file
+\e
diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt
index 5a5b836..d0dbe3e 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt
@@ -13,25 +13,26 @@
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 10, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0030", 100>
 Shiki
-Phew... Guess I pulled it off.
+Phew... I somehow pulled it off.
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0031", 100>
 Shiki
-It wasn't exactly intentional, but I hope I never
-have to fight a monster like that ever again.
+I wasn't exactly planning on it, but I could do without
+having to face off against another monster like that
+in my life.
 \l
 
 \\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 4, 0, 1>
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0032", 100>
 Shiki
-Damn, my body feels heavy. I had my glasses
-off for too long. I'm going to have trouble 
-getting home like this.
+Damn, I'm feeling really sluggish.
+I had my glasses off for too long.
+I don't think I can make it home like this.
 \l
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0033", 100>
 Shiki
-I'll just rest for a bit longer on this bench...
+I'll just rest up on this bench for a little bit.
 
 \\@CHARA_OUT@<0, -1, -1, 0, 0>
 \aw
@@ -41,22 +42,23 @@ I'll just rest for a bit longer on this bench...
 \aw
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0034", 100>
-That was when...
+That was when it happened.
 \l
 
 \\@SQ_CALL@<2>
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0035", 100>
-I heard a noise that sounded as if a vessel, perhaps 
-one named Shiki Tohno, broke against the ground,
-never to be whole again.
+I heard a loud "crack".
+Almost as if a vessel, one that may have once
+been called Shiki Tohno, mashed against the ground
+and broke apart, never to be whole again.
 \l
 
 \\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 77, 100>
 \\@SQ_CALL@<3>
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0036", 100>
-My pulse suddenly quickened.
+My pulse started racing.
 \l
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0037", 100>
@@ -64,27 +66,28 @@ My body was going at full spin.
 \l
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0038", 100>
-My veins, even my arteries, 
-all flared into great activity.
+My veins, even my arteries, all flared up,
+bustling with unlimited energy.
 \l
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0039", 100>
-My mind began breaking apart, more and more, as I
-saw a dream-like vision that set my spine alight.
+Cracks were forming in my mind, and as it kept violently
+splitting apart, I saw a vision that set my spine alight.
 \l
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0040", 100>
 Shiki
-...Agh...
+Agh...
 \l
 
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0041", 100>
 The night was not over yet.
 \l
 
+// TODO: vampires -> bloodsuckers?
 /*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0042", 100>
-It was only from that moment onward that my destiny 
-became TRULY intertwined with that of vampires.
+That was the moment where my destiny TRULY became
+intertwined with that of the vampires.
 
 \\@BGM_STOP@<0>
 \e
\ No newline at end of file

From e8fc19a6b267493dc275b421a33b69ba04c08cb5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2022 00:00:05 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 08/10] Shiki: Minor winmes edit

---
 EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
index f54db46..83a83e3 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ Has she been training in secret or something?
 WinMes11:
 chara_type 101
 Sorry, you two! I promise to head back to the mansion
-when I'm done here! I'll make it up to you then!
+when I'm done! I'll make it up to you then!
 \e
 
 // ���� Versus Hisui

From 0ad62de02b121649c4b0a44b56111499dba60e20 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2022 00:15:30 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 09/10] Shiki battlevoices

---
 EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv | 26 ++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv b/EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv
index c93bdd6..84ac0d4 100644
--- a/EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv
+++ b/EN/system/str_jp/stringfile_battlevoice.csv
@@ -133,19 +133,19 @@ battlevoice_chr002_636,I wonder if I went too far...,
 battlevoice_chr002_150,I cannot accept this!,
 battlevoice_chr002_151,Why you impudent little...!,
 battlevoice_chr002_108,Shouldn't you be working?,
-battlevoice_chr003_100,You're serious about this.,
+battlevoice_chr003_100,I see you're serious about this.,
 battlevoice_chr003_101,"I'd rather not, but if you wanna do this so badly...",
 battlevoice_chr003_102,Let's keep this short. I don't have much stamina.,
-battlevoice_chr003_103,My head aches so...,
+battlevoice_chr003_103,"I've got a headache right now, so...",
 battlevoice_chr003_104,You're making your brother worried.,
 battlevoice_chr003_105,I'm against domestic violence!,
 battlevoice_chr003_106,"A light spar, is it?",
-battlevoice_chr003_107,Aren't you saying you just wanna play around?!,
-battlevoice_chr003_108,"Isn't that an abuse of power, Ciel?",
-battlevoice_chr003_109,You're telling me the whole nun thing wasn't just a hobby?!,
-battlevoice_chr003_113,"Can we take this elsewher—Not gonna listen, huh?",
+battlevoice_chr003_107,Are you SURE you don't just want to play around?!,
+battlevoice_chr003_108,"Isn't this power abuse, Ciel?",
+battlevoice_chr003_109,You're telling me the whole nun thing WASN'T just a hobby?!,
+battlevoice_chr003_113,"Can we take this elsew—Not gonna listen, huh?",
 battlevoice_chr003_114,Looks like we're both outta luck.,
-battlevoice_chr003_650,Um... why did it come to this?,
+battlevoice_chr003_650,Um... How did we get here?,
 battlevoice_chr003_110,This is only the beginning.,
 battlevoice_chr003_111,"Okay, I've got the gist of it.",
 battlevoice_chr003_112,This is getting a little out of hand.,
@@ -153,24 +153,24 @@ battlevoice_chr003_652,Damn... So tired...,
 battlevoice_chr003_121,"Good grief, this is rough.",
 battlevoice_chr003_122,"This isn't over yet, is it?",
 battlevoice_chr003_123,"You're better than this, aren't you?",
-battlevoice_chr003_124,What a nightmare...,
+battlevoice_chr003_124,What a nightmare.,
 battlevoice_chr003_120,Damn... So tired...,
 battlevoice_chr003_653,I can't just use the back side of a double-edged knife.,
 battlevoice_chr003_654,"This isn't over yet, is it?!",
-battlevoice_chr003_655,"Still raring to go, are you?",
+battlevoice_chr003_655,"Still raring to go, huh?",
 battlevoice_chr003_130,"Phew, almost thought I was a goner there.",
 battlevoice_chr003_131,All's well that ends well.,
 battlevoice_chr003_657,"Alright, let's leave it at that then.",
 battlevoice_chr003_132,I'm legging it! Like I'd stay around for this!,
 battlevoice_chr003_658,"Sorry, I've gotta return some videotapes!",
-battlevoice_chr003_133,"If you've had enough, give up already.",
+battlevoice_chr003_133,"If you've had enough, stop getting up already.",
 battlevoice_chr003_134,"This is the end. Begone, vampire.",
 battlevoice_chr003_135,"No matter how many times I live, it won't be enough for this.",
 battlevoice_chr003_136,"Don't force yourself, just stay down.",
 battlevoice_chr003_656,I guess you've settled down?,
 battlevoice_chr003_659,Whoops. Looks like I win.,
 battlevoice_chr003_150,Damn... my chest wound!,
-battlevoice_chr003_151,You kept me running after you the whole time... I admit defeat...,
+battlevoice_chr003_151,You had me running after you the entire time... I admit defeat...,
 battlevoice_chr004_100,Hehehe. Let's get going!,
 battlevoice_chr004_101,The dependable maid makes her appearance!,
 battlevoice_chr004_102,What kind of medicine do you prefer?,
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ battlevoice_chr003_673,Right. This is who she is.,
 battlevoice_chr003_674,Seriously? You're gonna see how I've been by FIGHTING me?!,
 battlevoice_chr003_680,Yeah... a strong one... from below... right to the jaw...,
 battlevoice_chr003_681,"You're a real drill sergeant, you know?",
-battlevoice_chr003_682,It's fine. That won't be necessary.,
+battlevoice_chr003_682,It's fine. You don't have to.,
 battlevoice_chr005_650,"Don't be like that, my fellow vampire. I promise this'll be electrifying.",
 battlevoice_chr005_651,"What's wrong? I think you're lacking a bit of bloodlust, young lady!",
 battlevoice_chr005_652,"That was a long time ago. As you can see, I'm more of an outlaw now!",
@@ -685,4 +685,4 @@ battlevoice_chr017_144,Ya really fucking drew this one out... Feel like my finge
 battlevoice_chr017_145,"You ain't ready for real battle. Back to the basics, bitch!",
 battlevoice_chr008_693,"Suppression gear?! I-I'm innocent, I swear!",
 battlevoice_chr016_791,"Calm yourself. I'm using live ammo, but this is still just practice.",
-,, 
+,,

From ebcc012419fdf351715f99c92e4580d63d4d6294 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: LightArrowsEXE <Lightarrowsreboot@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2022 00:58:36 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 10/10] Shiki: Further editing, force CRLF

---
 .../talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt     | 113 ++++----
 .../talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt  | 255 +++++++++---------
 .../talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt  | 160 +++++------
 .../talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt     | 185 +++++++------
 EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt |   4 +-
 5 files changed, 359 insertions(+), 358 deletions(-)

diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt
index 4d829f4..a3746e1 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_00.txt
@@ -1,57 +1,58 @@
-\\@SYSTEM@<9999>
-\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg01", 0, 2>
-\aw
-
-\\@SYSTEM@<0>
-\\@SYSTEM@<1>
-\aw
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 44, 0>
-\\@CHARA_MUKI@<0,0>
-\aw
-
-\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 71, 100>
-
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0000", 100>
-Shiki
-What an ominous moon. If I don't keep it together,
-I'll start seeing lines everywhere.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0001", 100>
-Shiki
-On nights like these, it'd be wise to stay
-holed up at home until morning.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 4, 0, 1>
-\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<0, -1 , 13>
-\aw
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0002", 100>
-Shiki
-But there's no way I can do that.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0003", 100>
-Shiki
-Not as the only man in the house, anyway.
-\l
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0004", 100>
-Shiki
-It'd be really nice if I could show the others
-they can depend on me as the eldest son.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0005", 100>
-Shiki
-And the best way to do that right now would be to patrol
-around the mansion and deal with any trouble I find.
-
-\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
+\\@SYSTEM@<9999>
+\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg01", 0, 2>
+\aw
+
+\\@SYSTEM@<0>
+\\@SYSTEM@<1>
+\aw
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 44, 0>
+\\@CHARA_MUKI@<0,0>
+\aw
+
+\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 71, 100>
+
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0000", 100>
+Shiki
+What an ominous moon. If I don't keep it together,
+I'll start seeing lines everywhere.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0001", 100>
+Shiki
+On nights like these, it'd be wise to stay
+holed up at home until morning.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 4, 0, 1>
+\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<0, -1 , 13>
+\aw
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0002", 100>
+Shiki
+But there's no way I can do that.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0003", 100>
+Shiki
+Not as the only man in the house.
+\l
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0004", 100>
+Shiki
+It'd be really nice if I could show the others
+they can depend on me as the eldest son.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0005", 100>
+Shiki
+And the best way to do that right now would be to patrol
+around the mansion and deal with any trouble I find.
+\l
+
+\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
 \e
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt
index e1f0d8d..816756d 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_03.txt
@@ -1,127 +1,128 @@
-\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg10", 0, 2, 0>
-
-\\@SYSTEM@<0>
-\\@SYSTEM@<1>
-\aw
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@<1, 8, 9, 2, 0>
-\aw
-
-\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 74, 100>
-
-\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 1>
-\aw
-\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 1>
-\aw
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 7, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0010", 100>
-Noel
-Hmm...
-I can kinda see in, but not really...
-I can kinda enter, but not really...
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 3, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0011", 100>
-Noel
-What's wrong with this mansion?
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 4, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0012", 100>
-Noel
-They even installed a whole home security system...
-Who do they think they are, combining this modern junk
-with the lay of the land?!
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 3, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0013", 100>
-Noel
-Why can't they rely more on old fashioned magecraft?!
-Ugh, this sucks!
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 1, 0>
-\aw
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 7, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0010", 100>
-Shiki
-This is exactly what I was talking about.
-\l
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0011", 100>
-Shiki
-A super suspicious person blatantly peeking into our mansion.
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 6, 0, 1>
-\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 4>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0014", 100>
-Noel
-Wha?! Hang on... That bland, everyday teen appearance
-with killer eyes that sends chills up your spine!
-Yeah, only one person fits that bill...
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 0, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0015", 100>
-Noel
-Hey there, Shiki!
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 1, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0016", 100>
-Noel
-I understand that every boy your age is really interested
-in their attractive teacher's private life, I really do...
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 8, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0017", 100>
-Noel
-But stalking me on my night job?
-That's really naughty behaviour, young man.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 300, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0018", 100>
-Noel
-Or were you perhaps looking for more...
-"illicit" extra-curricular activities?
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_OUT@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 0>
-\aw
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 103, 11, 0>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0012", 100>
-Shiki
-...
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 11, 0, 1>
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, -1, 22, 20>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0019", 100>
-Noel
-Time out, time out! I know I look really suspicious right now,
-but hear me out! Don't jump to conclusions!
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 9, 32, 20>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0020", 100>
-Noel
-Oh well. I guess this saves us some time.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 0, 32, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0021", 100>
-Noel
-There's no point in hiding now that I've been found out.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 1, 32, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0022", 100>
-Noel
-Guess I'll juuust have to crush a couple bones
-so I can take you in for questioning!
-
-\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
-\e
+\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg10", 0, 2, 0>
+
+\\@SYSTEM@<0>
+\\@SYSTEM@<1>
+\aw
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@<1, 8, 9, 2, 0>
+\aw
+
+\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 74, 100>
+
+\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 1>
+\aw
+\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 1>
+\aw
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 7, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0010", 100>
+Noel
+Hmm...
+I can kinda see in, but not really...
+I can kinda enter, but not really...
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 3, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0011", 100>
+Noel
+What's wrong with this mansion?
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 4, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0012", 100>
+Noel
+They even installed a whole home security system...
+Who do they think they are, combining this modern junk
+with the lay of the land?!
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 3, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0013", 100>
+Noel
+Why can't they rely more on old fashioned magecraft?!
+Ugh, this sucks!
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 1, 0>
+\aw
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 7, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0010", 100>
+Shiki
+This is EXACTLY what I was talking about.
+\l
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0011", 100>
+Shiki
+We've got a super suspicious person blatantly peeking
+into our mansion.
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 6, 0, 1>
+\\@CHARA_EMOVE@<1, -1 , 4>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0014", 100>
+Noel
+Wha?! Hang on... That bland, everyday teen appearance
+with killer eyes that sends chills up your spine!
+Yeah, only one person fits that bill...
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 0, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0015", 100>
+Noel
+Hey there, Shiki!
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 1, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0016", 100>
+Noel
+I understand that every boy your age is really interested
+in their attractive teacher's private life, I really do...
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 8, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0017", 100>
+Noel
+But stalking me on my night job?
+That's really naughty behaviour, mister.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 300, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0018", 100>
+Noel
+Or were you perhaps looking for more...
+"illicit" extra-curricular activities?
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_OUT@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 0>
+\aw
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 103, 11, 0>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0012", 100>
+Shiki
+...
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 11, 0, 1>
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, -1, 22, 20>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0019", 100>
+Noel
+U-Uhm... I know I look really suspicious right now,
+but don't jump to conclusions, okay?
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 9, 32, 20>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0020", 100>
+Noel
+Oh well. On second thought, I guess this saves us some time.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 0, 32, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0021", 100>
+Noel
+No point hiding now that I've been found out!
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 8, 1, 32, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "08Noe/Noe05_0022", 100>
+Noel
+Guess I'll juuust have to crush a couple bones
+so I can take you in for questioning!
+
+\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
+\e
diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt
index b867f97..2ad7033 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_50_07.txt
@@ -1,80 +1,80 @@
-\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg06", 0, 2, 0>
-
-\\@SYSTEM@<0>
-\\@SYSTEM@<1>
-\aw
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@<0, 3, 0, 1, 0>
-\\@CHARA_IN@<1, 9, 1, 2, 0>
-\aw
-
-\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 75, 100>
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, -1, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0020", 100>
-Shiki
-So you're the one behind this whole vampire mess?
-Not really trying to hide it, are you?
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 1, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0020", 100>
-Volv
-You think this smoldering city is my work?
-What an unfounded and odd provocation, murderer.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 0, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0021", 100>
-Volv
-It makes me more mournful than upset.
-After all, one cannot stay angry at a fool.
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0021", 100>
-Shiki
-Really now? Hate to break it to you,
-but I really don't care what you think of me.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0022", 100>
-Shiki
-The mere sight of a vampire's almost enough
-to make me lose it.
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 0, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0022", 100>
-Volv
-I see. It appears you have a wound you cannot forget,
-yet cannot recall either.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 4, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0023", 100>
-Volv
-How pitiful. It brings you such fury it compels you
-to challenge even a Dead Apostle, despite the fact
-you are merely human.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 2, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0024", 100>
-Volv
-I could not turn down such a challenge, now could I?
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 3, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0025", 100>
-Volv
-Come, blood bag.
-I shall gratefully accept your scorching blood.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 102, 0, 1>//�{��2
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0023", 100>
-Shiki
-Sorry to disappoint, but what I've got in store for you
-is neither warm nor cold. It's simply death.
-
-\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
-\e
+\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg06", 0, 2, 0>
+
+\\@SYSTEM@<0>
+\\@SYSTEM@<1>
+\aw
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@<0, 3, 0, 1, 0>
+\\@CHARA_IN@<1, 9, 1, 2, 0>
+\aw
+
+\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 75, 100>
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, -1, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0020", 100>
+Shiki
+So you're the one behind this whole vampire mess?
+Not really trying to hide it, are you?
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 1, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0020", 100>
+Volv
+You think this smoldering city is my work?
+What an unfounded and odd provocation, murderer.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 0, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0021", 100>
+Volv
+It makes me more mournful than upset.
+After all, one cannot stay angry at a fool.
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0021", 100>
+Shiki
+Really now? Hate to break it to you,
+but I really don't care what you think of me.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 2, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0022", 100>
+Shiki
+The mere sight of a vampire's almost enough
+to make me lose it.
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 0, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0022", 100>
+Volv
+I see. It appears you have a wound you cannot forget,
+yet cannot recall either.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 4, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0023", 100>
+Volv
+How pitiful. It brings you such fury it compels you
+to challenge even a Dead Apostle, despite the fact
+you are merely human.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 2, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0024", 100>
+Volv
+I could not turn down such a challenge, now could I?
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 1, 9, 3, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "09Vlo/Vlo05_0025", 100>
+Volv
+Come, blood bag.
+I shall gratefully accept your scorching blood.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 102, 0, 1>//�{��2
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0023", 100>
+Shiki
+Sorry to disappoint, but what I've got in store for you
+is neither warm nor cold. It's simply death.
+
+\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
+\e
diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt
index d0dbe3e..3b017f2 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/talk/script/chr003/talk_chr003_90.txt
@@ -1,93 +1,92 @@
-\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg03", 0, 2>
-
-\\@SYSTEM@<0>
-\\@SYSTEM@<1>
-\aw
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 44, 0>
-\\@CHARA_MUKI@<0,0>
-\aw
-
-\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 76, 100>
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 10, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0030", 100>
-Shiki
-Phew... I somehow pulled it off.
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0031", 100>
-Shiki
-I wasn't exactly planning on it, but I could do without
-having to face off against another monster like that
-in my life.
-\l
-
-\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 4, 0, 1>
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0032", 100>
-Shiki
-Damn, I'm feeling really sluggish.
-I had my glasses off for too long.
-I don't think I can make it home like this.
-\l
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0033", 100>
-Shiki
-I'll just rest up on this bench for a little bit.
-
-\\@CHARA_OUT@<0, -1, -1, 0, 0>
-\aw
-\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
-
-\\@SQ_CALL@<1>
-\aw
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0034", 100>
-That was when it happened.
-\l
-
-\\@SQ_CALL@<2>
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0035", 100>
-I heard a loud "crack".
-Almost as if a vessel, one that may have once
-been called Shiki Tohno, mashed against the ground
-and broke apart, never to be whole again.
-\l
-
-\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 77, 100>
-\\@SQ_CALL@<3>
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0036", 100>
-My pulse started racing.
-\l
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0037", 100>
-My body was going at full spin.
-\l
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0038", 100>
-My veins, even my arteries, all flared up,
-bustling with unlimited energy.
-\l
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0039", 100>
-Cracks were forming in my mind, and as it kept violently
-splitting apart, I saw a vision that set my spine alight.
-\l
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0040", 100>
-Shiki
-Agh...
-\l
-
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0041", 100>
-The night was not over yet.
-\l
-
-// TODO: vampires -> bloodsuckers?
-/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0042", 100>
-That was the moment where my destiny TRULY became
-intertwined with that of the vampires.
-
-\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
-\e
\ No newline at end of file
+\\@BG_IN@<"screen_bg03", 0, 2>
+
+\\@SYSTEM@<0>
+\\@SYSTEM@<1>
+\aw
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 0, 44, 0>
+\\@CHARA_MUKI@<0,0>
+\aw
+
+\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 76, 100>
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 10, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0030", 100>
+Shiki
+Phew... I somehow pulled it off.
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0031", 100>
+Shiki
+I wasn't exactly planning on it, but I could do without
+having to face off against another monster like that
+in my life.
+\l
+
+\\@CHARA_IN@< 0, 3, 4, 0, 1>
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0032", 100>
+Shiki
+Damn, I'm feeling really sluggish.
+I had my glasses off for too long.
+I don't think I can make it home like this.
+\l
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0033", 100>
+Shiki
+I'll just rest up on this bench for a little bit.
+
+\\@CHARA_OUT@<0, -1, -1, 0, 0>
+\aw
+\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
+
+\\@SQ_CALL@<1>
+\aw
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0034", 100>
+That was when it happened.
+\l
+
+\\@SQ_CALL@<2>
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0035", 100>
+I heard a loud "crack". Almost as if a vessel, one that may
+have once been called Shiki Tohno, smashed against the ground
+and broke apart, never to be whole again.
+\l
+
+\\@BGM_PLAY@<0, 77, 100>
+\\@SQ_CALL@<3>
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0036", 100>
+My pulse started racing.
+\l
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0037", 100>
+My body was going at full spin.
+\l
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0038", 100>
+My veins, even my arteries, all flared up,
+bustling with unlimited energy.
+\l
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0039", 100>
+Cracks were forming in my mind, and as it kept violently
+splitting apart, I saw a vision that set my spine alight.
+\l
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0040", 100>
+Shiki
+Agh...
+\l
+
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0041", 100>
+The night was not over yet.
+\l
+
+// TODO: vampires -> bloodsuckers?
+/*-auto-*/\\@VOICE_PLAY@<0, "03Sik/Sik05_0042", 100>
+That was the moment where my destiny TRULY became
+intertwined with that of the vampires.
+
+\\@BGM_STOP@<0>
+\e
diff --git a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
index 83a83e3..edbabff 100644
--- a/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
+++ b/EN/BattleRes/win_mes/script/chr003/winmes.txt
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ but I never go down without a fight.
 // �����V�G�� Versus Powered Ciel
 WinMes16:
 chara_type 100
-I learned a lot from this mock battle.
+Thanks, this mock battle taught me a lot.
 I did my best to match my movements with yours, like a waltz.
 We may have been fighting against each other rather than
 with each other this time, but it was fun all the same.
@@ -150,4 +150,4 @@ chara_type 0
 Ten wins?! That's amazing!
 This is actually pretty fun!
 Let's keep it up!
-\e
\ No newline at end of file
+\e